Ravenpaw (RiverClan)
Oct 13, 2009 12:59:55 GMT -6
Post by rain. on Oct 13, 2009 12:59:55 GMT -6
Name: Ravenpaw
Age: 6 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Apprentice
Clan: RiverClan
Short Description: Small black tom with a white dash on his chest and blue-green eyes
Appearance: Ravenpaw is a pretty small tom for his age. His short looks also come with lack of muscle. So, when you see Ravenpaw, you don't think of a very strong or brave cat.
His whole body, from his facial features to his tail, are all slim. He has no muscle, and because of that works on the lines of speed instead of strength. The good thing about his features is that it makes him look mysterious with the pavement of his coat.
Going on that subject, he has a raven-black pelt. The only thing that scars it is the white dash on his chest. His fur is very soft due to his young age, and his pads are smooth and healthy because of the lack of activity. His tail is pretty long, and his paws are smaller than small.
His muzzle is a little on the flat side, but not totally flat. Just not sharp and long like a lot of handsome cats' are. His face overall looks sharp with sharp cheekbones and chin. Which makes his muzzle stick out a little. Along with his eyes with its unique blue-green shading.
Personality: Ravenpaw, since he was a kit, was always very skittish. His small, innocent looks match perfectly with his personality. He stutters a lot due to uncertainty, and doesn't like new things. He is shy, and seeks protection in cats he trusts which are only his two sisters.
Ravenpaw gets scared very easily, even when it comes to a story told by a queen. He never wants to face challenges or go out into the world beyond the camp. Despite all this, since his father died, he wanted to become like him. Which is very hard.
He tries to act serious, but his lack of confidence side usually wins. He tries to act brave, but he gets scared by the slightest sound. He tries to act strong, but his weak structure makes him clumsy. But he challenges himself anyway, wanting to be strong, brave and loyal so instead of his sisters protecting him all the time, he can protect them.
History: Ravenpaw was born in the mountains in the Tribe of Rushing Water. No, he is Clan born. He just didn't have the fortune of being born in RiverClan's camp or territory. Though, he still is only half-Clan, due to his father's rogue blood.
But throughout most of his kithood, he and his sisters, Snowpaw and Wavepaw, knew nothing of their real heritage. They went on believing Twilightfrost was their mother, who took care of them in the nursery. He always was found with his sister, Snowpaw, or Snowkit back then. She was like a guardian angel to him.
While Wavekit he found very frightening. All through his kithood, he never had the courage to be like most kits and explore or break rules. He was always huddled in the nursery, afraid of everything.
When about 5 moons old, Snowkit coaxed him out of his protected sanctuary, venturing out into the territory. There they met Raven, a former warrior who was exiled, and told them of their true history. He and Snowstar were their true parents.
Ravenkit became deeply terrified of Raven. What if he killed him to have revenge on Snowstar? Or killed him just because of the hatred that he was his son? His cowardly son? But, coaxed out again by both his sisters, he ventured out again anyway. Though he was deeply afraid.
Between Snowkit's wounded body from the storm and the confession, Ravenkit and Wavekit became allies and friends. When they were all safely back at camp, they seemed to all have each others' backs. But something went wrong.
A gathering was held the following moon, but chaos broke through the camp when blood was scented, and they all moved out. The three siblings followed secretly. When they entered the scene, they found their parents, dead side by side. That was the first time Ravenpaw felt cold and emotionless. Like nothing mattered anymore. Like Raven himself had took over his soul.
From then on, he wanted to be like Raven. He was a good cat now, and he wanted to make him proud instead of be afraid of him.
The three became apprentices, but his new confidence only gave birth to trouble. A new unknown enemy has come forth, Speckledpaw, who is also a new apprentice. Will they remain enemies, or finally make up and become friends?
( I never knew I didn't make Ravenpaw's bio, and since Dreamer pointed it out, I decided to make his bio at last. Sorry to everyone, and little Ravenpaw )
