Hawkeyes [Thunderclan]

Hawkeyes

Age:13 Moons
Gender:Tom
Rank:Warrior
Clan:Thunderclan
Short Description:A pale gray tabby tom with white paws, and underbelly, amber eyes.

Appearance:
Hawkeyes is average for his age. All of his muscles are in his shoulders making him strong when in combat. While Hawkeyes was made mostly made for fighting he is not made for running, in fact Hawkeyes is the slowest cat in Thunderclan.

Hawkeyes's coat is a very pale gray that blends into the light forest floor with the help of a few darker gray stripes going down along his back to his tail. At the tip of his tail is pure white, and so are all four of his paws. His pale amber eyes matches pretty well with his pale gray coat also.

Personality:
Hawkeyes is not a socializing cat, he would rather be by himself then with one of his clanmates. Even though he doesn't like most of his clanmates he deals with them by pretending to listen to them and their problems, but he never gives a hoot.

Throughout the day he would just sit out in the sun blocking out all the commotion going on in the camp, or he would be on a patrol with other warriors.

History:
Hawkeyes joined Thunderclan when he was six moons. Hawkeyes has no memory of his parents or siblings, all he does remember was a twoleg picking him up and taking him in a large, bright, warm room. Until he was five moons old the twolegs took him outside into a huge house that wasn't as warm as the other or welcoming.

As Hawkeyes was pushed out into the barn where other cats lived and defended for themselves, he began to hate his life with them. As days had passed they would always pick on him and attack him in a one-on-two fight, where he would always get a bad wound.

So as he stayed for another few nights he decided to leave the farm cats and venture out on his own. He left one evening toward the large open space that looked like a meadow. He looked across the land, but knew this wouldn't be the place for him.

As Hawkeyes continued forward he soon found a small patch of trees. Hawkeyes wrapped himself in a tight ball up against a tree and slept there for the night.

The next morning a group of three large cats found him, and took him as a prisoner, or that he thought they did. When they arrived at a large open space filled with all kinds of cats more than at the barn that he used to live in.

He was dragged toward a den up above the clearing and met a stunning blue-gray she-cat that greeted him with respect unlike the others. As she talked to him in private in her den, she invited him to join the clan and he had excepted the offer.

That night Hawkeyes had become an apprentice and his mentor had been Bluefrost, a beautiful black she-cat.

After months that he had joined Thunderclan a huge flood came and washed out the Thunderclan camp forcing the clan to move out quickly as possible. As Thunderclan decided to go to the mountains they soon found out that the other clans were going as well.

During the trip up to the mountain, Hawkeyes, Hawkpaw at the time met up with a Shadowclan apprentice known as Mothpaw. As Hawkeyes had been padding along the outside of the group of cats staying a little ways away from his clan trying to find some alone time, but Mothpaw just had to ruin that from him and that was how their rival began. Mothpaw annoying Hawkeyes, and Hawkeyes trying to force her away.

After months up in the mountain the clans soon got to go back to their territory were Hawkeyes had to fight off badgers that had invaded the camp. As his mentor, Bluefrost was almost ready to give birth and was in no condition to fight off a badger, he tried his best to keep all of the badgers away from the she-cat.

When Bluefrost finally gave birth to her kits, Hawkeyes was left with no mentor for Bluefrost had all her attention on her kits, and Hawkeyes didn't blame her for wanting to be with them. So he got stuck with any warrior that felt like training an apprentice. The only cat that did was the black-and-white warrior, Seabird.

During a patrol with Seabird they met up with a Shadowclan patrol with a brown warrior known as Cougarface, and the annoying apprentice that he had met on the mountains, Mothpaw. When they met the patrol a fight broke out between them, but it ended soon as Cougarface ran off with a hiss.

Soon after the fight Hawkpaw had his warrior ceremony and became Hawkeyes, the new warrior of Thunderclan.

Accepted~ Just a few errors =D

Hawkeyes is average for his age. All of his muscle are in his shoulders making him strong when in compact.

Muscle should be muscles and compact should be combat XD

So has he stayed for another few nights he decided to leave the farm cats and venture out on his own.

Has should be as.

Until he was five moons old the twolegs took outside into a huge house that wasn't has warm as the other or welcoming.

Has should be as and it should state: Until he was five moons old the twolegs took him outside into a huge house that wasn't has warm as the other or welcoming.

As Hawkeyes was pushed out into the barn were other cats lived and defended for themselves, he began to hate his life with them.

Were should be where.


It should state: Until he was five moons old the twolegs took him outside into a huge house that wasn't has warm as the other or welcoming.

^{Umm.... I wasn't done with it, but thanks for pointing out the mistakes xD}

LOLZ...Uh BLAME WISH XD

Oh well my excuse is...I was just pointing out mistakes so it can be accepted quicker when it's ready? XD Haha sorry XP

^{It's okay thanks xD}

^{You'll probably find alot more errors. -sighs-}

Accepted~ FOR REAL THIS TIME

As Hawkeyes had been padding along the outside of the group of cat staying a little ways away from his clan trying to find some alone time, but Mothpaw just had to ruin that from him and that was how their rival began.

Cat should be cats. Thats it though XD