Rainflight [ThunderClan]

Name- Rainflight

Rank- Warrior

Clan- ThunderClan

Age- 15 moons

Short discription: black she-cat with blue eyes

Appearance- Rainflight is a small, soft-furred raven-black she-cat with unique stormy blue eyes. She has a deep scar below her right eye, a nick in her ear and she has a very delicate figure. She has a long-pointed muzzle, but it doesn't look like that if you faced her. She has very sharp fangs and claws since she was a kit, which makes her a very good fighter.

Personality: Brave, friendly and strong. She has a very outgoing personality and a nack of trouble because of her adventurous and outgoing spirit. Also, don't underestimate her looks, she maybe delicate on the outside, but she is very tough and isn't very easily hurt. Has a leader's spirit, even though she does break the rules once in a while, but she is a very great leader and when she was a kit she would do anything to take the role of leading in any kit-game. She is very friendly and loves to go on adventures, but hates to see a cat hurt. She can be serious when needed, but very rare.

History- She was given birth by Shadowtail and since she got her eyes open she had already started her first adventure with her sister, Seabird, on a quest to chase out a fox raiding ThunderClan territory. They ended up almost dead if it wern't for Owltalon, Riverfrost and Swiftstar. Soon she fell in love with the young tom Owltalon.
Soon after she is given a prophecy from Owltalon after his fall that the Clans will face a wolf pack.
Then, in the wolf battle Rainflight and Owltalon kill the alpha and excape death with only a few scars.

When she became a warrior, her dread became a reality. Now ranked a queen, she now bares two of Owltalon's kits, Kestrelkit and Mystickit. Currently she still regrets this, and still doesn't have a stedy relationship with her kits. She also fears of not raising her kits right, or them ending like her, a trouble-maker. But nothing is decided yet.
Rainflight's story has only just begun, and it won't end soon..

Accepted&& But here are a few mistakes that I found :3

She has a deep scar bellow her right eye, a nick in her ear and she has a very delicate figure.

Bellow should be below, since the type of Bellow you had would be to make the deep roaring sound most likely from the throat of a bull.

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They ended up almost dead if it wernt for Owltalon, Riverfrost and Swiftstar.

It should be weren't.

Anyways Rainflight is one of my all time favorite characters of yours and I love roleplaying with her :3

Bellow should be below, since the type of Bellow you had would be to make the deep roaring sound most likely from the throat of a bull.

That was a typing error actually XP From now on I'll reread throughly and make sure everything is spelt correctly XD

They ended up almost dead if it wernt for Owltalon, Riverfrost and Swiftstar.

Also a typing error. Same as what I said before. This'll give me more of what to look for when I'm looking at bios =D -fixes-

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