My comission (Nightpaw)

FORESTPAW
I got to admit its getting better,a little better all the time!

Forestpaw broke from the hunting patrol she was on.She heard some noises and wanted to investigate.She caught a familiar scent as she came closer to the place.It was not a scent of a piece of prey,but of a cat.Two cats."One is shadowclan." she said as she sniffed the air."The other is not." Curiosity surfaced as the one present emotion as she inched closer and closer.The she cat could hear the voices more clearly.The scents became sharper.One was nightpaw.She was sure of it.The other she didn't recognize.She crept up to them,staying out of sight.As she began to see the cats,she stepped on a twig.It snapped.She swore at herself and backed up hoping that Nightpaw would help her regain cover.She knew he would.She stayed still after a few steps to eavesdrop on them.She needed information before she would decide to turn this mystery cat in.

<sup>Nightpaw
Following my father's pawsteps

Nightpaw flinched as yet another wound was inflicted on his skin. Growling as his rage deepened he hissed, "You know, I won't be able to even walk if you keep wounding me like this! Unless you can use your magical powers and heal me too!"

Suddenly, a noise distracted him, a ShadowClan scent hovered in the air. Too panicked to detect who the cat was in particular, he whipped around, his gaze pinpointed on the figure lurking in the undergrowth. "Show yourself."</sup>

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( I'm a little brain dead at creativeness if you couldn't tell XD So this was pretty unimaginative and straight forward D: )

(you realise this means that forestpaw is gonna be in big trouble now?)

Starsbane
^{I am powerful, I am immortal, I can do anything, I am cursed, I am the Darkness}

Starsbane didn't yell at the interloper, instead she leapt into the undergrowth at the cat. Her claws were unsheathed, and her fangs bared. Her razor sharp claws aimed at Forestpaw's shoulders, trying to disable her.

<sup>Nightpaw
Following my father's pawsteps

Nightpaw realized who the intruder was when he focused his attention more carefully on the scent. With a smile he called, "Forestpaw!" but was cut off when Starsbane had suddenly leaped at her. Screeching in anger he lept in advance, leaping infront of Starbane in order for her aim to be directed on him.

"Don't hurt her! She's causing no harm!"</sup>

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(Yes.Prettey epic eh rainy?)

FORESTPAW
I got to admit its getting better,a little better all the time!

Forestpaw had no time for thought.She couldn't react.Nightpaw took the force of Starbane's blow.She leapt at Starsbane in an attempt to bring her to the ground.She had no idea what to do as she was airborne.Her claws instinctively ripped into her as result of training.She yanked in attempt to cause pain.She faintly smelt blood.She delatched and tackeled her in another attempt to bring her down.

(Mystic,do you wannas do a training for her sometime? Been meaning to get around to that but it slipped my mind.)

<sup>Nightpaw
Following my father's pawsteps

Nightpaw tumbled to the ground after the collision, feeling more pain then ever. Struggling up in focus to block out the sharp pain in his body, his eyes caught Forestpaw trying to take Starsbane down. Even though they were almost the same age and Forestpaw was particularly skilled, Starsbane was strong, too. Equipped with much more knowledge.

Deciding to help just in case she would hurt his friend, and payback for the way she treated him, he launched his body at Starsbane, aiming for her back, his claws unsheathed in order to attack onto her skin.</sup>

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Starsbane
^{I am powerful, I am immortal, I can do anything, I am cursed, I am the Darkness}
(time for vampire kitty.)
Starsbane snarled at the tom. "Stand down or I will hurt you badly." She slammed into him then turned on Forestpaw.

Swiping her tongue over her abnormally long fangs she stalked forward and bit into the she-cat's neck. She didn't aim for anything fatal, she just wanted blood. Then she began to lap up the blood that flowed.

"I can give you immortality, like I have." she whispered to the she-cat... "Or you can die."